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Wednesday 31 October 2018

Explanation Writing - Term 4

Kia Ora bloggers!

Yesterday Team Moana wrote an explanation writing on how everyone can cope with environmental problems. I wrote about environment pollution!

Here is my writing:





Name: Amethyst
Explanation Writing - Term 4

Prompt: - - Write to describe one environmental problem and explain what people do to reduce its impact on the planet.

Think about:
  • What your reader needs to know about the topic
  • How you are going to introduce the topic
  • The order of your ideas and how you link them
  • What to include in your summary

Remember to:
  • Choose your words carefully
  • Take care with your spelling, punctuation, and sentences
  • Edit - add or delete words or sentences to improve your work


Start Writing Here:
Environment is a word relating the earth and nature. But sometimes the environment has some problems, Problem is a word relating to a situation that may involve harmful words and pollution which is what the earth has. One of the problems that the environment has is “environmental pollution ” (Land pollution).

Here are 3 ways on how to help with this type pollution

My reasons are as followed:


Firstly,
Recycle. Anything thats can be used again such as: water bottles,boxes,containers etc you should keep. If you recycle it can cause less pollution and all our animals will be plastic free.


Secondly,
Cleaning up your environment. Everytime you go for a walk or jog you will see some pieces right?. If you see a piece of rubbish and a nearby rubbish bin,pick it up and put it in the bin. Not only does this help the environment but it makes your country look a little bit better.


Finally,
Try eating food with no rappers / plastic. Most food with rappers are either: chocolate bars, energy bars, chips,cookies etc. This doesn’t only affect our environment but it’s a unhealthy diet. So, instead of eating junk food you can eat healthy food like your fruits and vegetables. This will not increase the earth to a healthy lifestyle but your health will be involved as well.

I hope you enjoyed reading my explanation writing! And remember with the power of: Recycling,Cleaning our earth and try eating healthy we can help the earth and the animals life a better life.

Thank you and Goodbye….






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