Kia Ora bloggers!
Yesterday team moana started reading a book called "The legend of Rock paper scissors" after reading the book we had to make a comic strip using 2 characters from the book or class room materials. We also were aloud to do it digital.
Here is my comic:
Showing posts with label writing 2018. Show all posts
Showing posts with label writing 2018. Show all posts
Friday, 2 November 2018
The legend of Rock, Paper and Scissors
Wednesday, 31 October 2018
Explanation Writing - Term 4
Kia Ora bloggers!
Yesterday Team Moana wrote an explanation writing on how everyone can cope with environmental problems. I wrote about environment pollution!
Here is my writing:
Yesterday Team Moana wrote an explanation writing on how everyone can cope with environmental problems. I wrote about environment pollution!
Here is my writing:
Name: Amethyst
Explanation Writing - Term 4
Prompt: - - Write to describe one environmental problem and explain what people do to reduce its impact on the planet.
Think about:
- What your reader needs to know about the topic
- How you are going to introduce the topic
- The order of your ideas and how you link them
- What to include in your summary
Remember to:
- Choose your words carefully
- Take care with your spelling, punctuation, and sentences
- Edit - add or delete words or sentences to improve your work
Start Writing Here:
Environment is a word relating the earth and nature. But sometimes the environment has some problems, Problem is a word relating to a situation that may involve harmful words and pollution which is what the earth has. One of the problems that the environment has is “environmental pollution ” (Land pollution).
Here are 3 ways on how to help with this type pollution
My reasons are as followed:
Firstly,
Recycle. Anything thats can be used again such as: water bottles,boxes,containers etc you should keep. If you recycle it can cause less pollution and all our animals will be plastic free.
Secondly,
Cleaning up your environment. Everytime you go for a walk or jog you will see some pieces right?. If you see a piece of rubbish and a nearby rubbish bin,pick it up and put it in the bin. Not only does this help the environment but it makes your country look a little bit better.
Finally,
Try eating food with no rappers / plastic. Most food with rappers are either: chocolate bars, energy bars, chips,cookies etc. This doesn’t only affect our environment but it’s a unhealthy diet. So, instead of eating junk food you can eat healthy food like your fruits and vegetables. This will not increase the earth to a healthy lifestyle but your health will be involved as well.
I hope you enjoyed reading my explanation writing! And remember with the power of: Recycling,Cleaning our earth and try eating healthy we can help the earth and the animals life a better life.
Thank you and Goodbye….
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Friday, 19 October 2018
Greats and Grands day writing
Kia Ora Bloggers! '
This Friday is Greats and Grands day, We had to write an explanation on an aging problem our grandparents had and how they could fix it.
This Friday is Greats and Grands day, We had to write an explanation on an aging problem our grandparents had and how they could fix it.
Here is my work below:
Understanding an explanation.
Beginning
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Title
Copy your explanation title here.
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How Grandparents Cope with Weak Eyesight.
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1st paragraph
Define and describe what you are explaining.
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A grandparent is a person who is old enough for their baby to have a baby. When people start to get old different parts of their bodies start to get worn out and they can no longer do what they could do before. This is called aging and it causes many problems. One aging problem that a grandparent may have to deal with is weak eyesight.
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Middle
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2nd paragraph
Write about one thing you can do to cope with weak eyesight.
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One thing that a grandparent can do to cope with eyesight loss is to make sure that they wear clear glasses at all times. This can help you see the world clearly instead of everything being blurry.
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3rd paragraph
Write about a second thing you can do to cope with weak eyesight
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Another thing to do is get a guide dog. A guide dog can do so much more than your normal eyes. It is very helpful and will lead you the way to the shops and back.
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4th paragraph
Write about a third thing you can do to cope with weak eyesight
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One last thing you could do is make sure all devices you have like Phones, Laptops, TV’s etc to good quality and a bigger words so that you can see what people are saying clearly.
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End
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5th paragraph
Wind up your writing.
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Weak eyesight can be a difficult aging problem for grandparents to deal with but people are hopeful that improvements in technology will be a big help for this in the future.
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Tuesday, 25 September 2018
Ski trip Diary
Kia ora bloggers.
It has been a while but I would like to tell you what Team moana has been up to for the past 3 weeks. Team Moana had to write personal recount (ski trip diary) about everything we did during our school ski trip to National Park in September 2018. It was a blast!
It has been a while but I would like to tell you what Team moana has been up to for the past 3 weeks. Team Moana had to write personal recount (ski trip diary) about everything we did during our school ski trip to National Park in September 2018. It was a blast!
Friday, 24 August 2018
Animal report
Kia ora bloggers!
For the past few weeks we have been assigned to write a report about animals. We could go in groups if we wanted. I decided to choose a year 5 girl who's name is Saphera Huia Walker. We thought doing leopards for our animal report would be fun and easy.
Here is our report:
For the past few weeks we have been assigned to write a report about animals. We could go in groups if we wanted. I decided to choose a year 5 girl who's name is Saphera Huia Walker. We thought doing leopards for our animal report would be fun and easy.
Here is our report:
Tuesday, 24 July 2018
The holidays
Hola bloggers!
I absolutely LOVED MY HOLIDAYS! For the first week of the holidays I went to Auckland and explored a lot of places like the zoo, cinemas, downtown plus I saw an amazing slingshot or what Auckland called it the "sky scream" it was AMAZING. I could hardly describe how adventurous it was. But now I'm back at school, not so excited but with a fresh mind. But the cool thing is I got to see my friends again.
Hope to blog with you guys later and before I go what is your favourite animal?.
Thanks for reading! Amethyst.

I absolutely LOVED MY HOLIDAYS! For the first week of the holidays I went to Auckland and explored a lot of places like the zoo, cinemas, downtown plus I saw an amazing slingshot or what Auckland called it the "sky scream" it was AMAZING. I could hardly describe how adventurous it was. But now I'm back at school, not so excited but with a fresh mind. But the cool thing is I got to see my friends again.
Hope to blog with you guys later and before I go what is your favourite animal?.
Thanks for reading! Amethyst.

Friday, 11 May 2018
Autumn Peotry
Gday Bloggers.
Yesterday we had to make a type of poem describing autumn! What we did was:
1. Go outside a sit on the court
2. sketch something autumn theme
3. once finished sketch describe this object or thing with words
4. Go inside and write a poem with the words you used!
and that's it guess anyways,
Here is my Autumn poem:
(Its a shape kind of poem)
Friday, 23 March 2018
Weather Poem.
Kia ora bloggers.
We had to write five different similes based on Weather. We had six options and they were rainbows, snow, rain, sun, thunder lightning and wind...I decided to do rainbows. Then we had to write five similes down on a DLO and then make a picture...
Here is mine:
We had to write five different similes based on Weather. We had six options and they were rainbows, snow, rain, sun, thunder lightning and wind...I decided to do rainbows. Then we had to write five similes down on a DLO and then make a picture...
Here is mine:
Wednesday, 21 March 2018
Dolphin Similes!
Kia Ora Bloggers!
For the past 2 weeks we have been learning about Similes...Yesterday we had to write some similes about these pictures I decided to do a "Dolphin". Here is my Smiles:
For the past 2 weeks we have been learning about Similes...Yesterday we had to write some similes about these pictures I decided to do a "Dolphin". Here is my Smiles:
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